tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7633265628054619928.post4506063939286197914..comments2023-10-31T16:05:58.638+00:00Comments on Broken Trails: FEAR OF THE DARK by Ray FosterRayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18154296143024548830noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7633265628054619928.post-11953746216669330932009-04-21T00:29:00.000+01:002009-04-21T00:29:00.000+01:00Creepy or what? Hooked to the end.Creepy or what? Hooked to the end.Dominic Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02801536235936956272noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7633265628054619928.post-43444194508834781672009-04-19T15:38:00.000+01:002009-04-19T15:38:00.000+01:00This is a good prologue to a horror novel where th...This is a good prologue to a horror novel where the woman's psychology is examined and her relationship with her sister can be laid bare... maybe more twists to come, even. And all from a glimpse of dark rain in the street. Excellent, Ray.Nik Mortonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10060923673065456386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7633265628054619928.post-84907482325812146562009-04-18T13:20:00.000+01:002009-04-18T13:20:00.000+01:00That was good, Ray. Nearly saw it coming, but not ...That was good, Ray. Nearly saw it coming, but not that final tiny twist.Jan Joneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00471022034388834235noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7633265628054619928.post-75357752006623164502009-04-18T08:45:00.000+01:002009-04-18T08:45:00.000+01:00Ray - you have the knack for the creepy stuff. You...Ray - you have the knack for the creepy stuff. You should try a horror novel.Gary Dobbs/Jack Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10935686140719743351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7633265628054619928.post-63643363291937566842009-04-17T15:55:00.000+01:002009-04-17T15:55:00.000+01:00Many thanks for all the kind comments. The story w...Many thanks for all the kind comments. The story was a 'spur of the moment' thing. I was just closing the curtains and looking at the wet pavement and the lights reflecting on the surface and - well there it is.Rayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18154296143024548830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7633265628054619928.post-8065532292590491362009-04-17T03:27:00.000+01:002009-04-17T03:27:00.000+01:00Very nice, Ray!Very nice, Ray!Howardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17745394055448870711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7633265628054619928.post-41455573572921756192009-04-17T03:01:00.000+01:002009-04-17T03:01:00.000+01:00Oh, I enjoyed that.Oh, I enjoyed that.David Cranmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04749857752139212888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7633265628054619928.post-15891786734114093572009-04-16T15:23:00.001+01:002009-04-16T15:23:00.001+01:00I loved that Ray. Very, very good twist.I loved that Ray. Very, very good twist.Paul D Brazillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12881642426845398389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7633265628054619928.post-15262906131361834672009-04-16T15:23:00.000+01:002009-04-16T15:23:00.000+01:00Very successfully creepy. I like this a lot Ray.Very successfully creepy. I like this a lot Ray.Elizabeth Haysmonthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01167517867828909705noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7633265628054619928.post-5781968641593319772009-04-16T08:43:00.000+01:002009-04-16T08:43:00.000+01:00Very good. It kept me guessing right to the end.Very good. It kept me guessing right to the end.Jo Walpolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13972318968316588965noreply@blogger.com